Frankg Posted August 4, 2014 Report Share Posted August 4, 2014 Hi, don't want to annoy you, but… :) Could you please help me? I'm doing some renderings of my old projects for my new upcoming website (Industrial design). Since I know the items inside out i loose control over the impact they have. I will post many of them, here is the first one:) Here is the link: http://www.kraftraum-design.de/Server/Kraftraum_Artwork.htm Please wait some seconds for playback or right-click for download. Best regards Frankg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S. Houtzager Posted August 5, 2014 Report Share Posted August 5, 2014 Looks great, very clean. There is not a lot to improve that. The only thing is that plastic on the body could have either a glossiness to it or a slight bumpiness. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frankg Posted August 5, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2014 That was my impression too. Thank you for the input. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buggsy Posted August 6, 2014 Report Share Posted August 6, 2014 Hi Frankg, I have done very little animation but thought I'd add my input. Composition wise, I'm not a fan of the way the product, while it opens, passes behind the lettering. Also the Kraftraum logo could fade slower into view. It seems a little abrupt. Michael Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomas Egger Posted August 6, 2014 Report Share Posted August 6, 2014 Hey Frank! I liked, really nice, but I would like to see it rendered with Global Illumination, your product will become more realistic. We can think together I nice way to do that. Thanks Tom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frankg Posted August 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2014 Thank you all for the input, which is very helpful for me. I'm working on that and will show you. Is there a limit for uploaded data? I tried to upload the movie directly, but it was refused. It is about 4,3 MB regards Frankg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RichardJoly Posted August 7, 2014 Report Share Posted August 7, 2014 It's a book light, how about showing it on a book…? We could see how it clips and light the actual book. This would give you something to reflect on the object accentuating the different materials of the products. The product information could be written inside the book. That's my 2 cents (0.01 Euro) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frankg Posted August 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2014 Hi all, new Version online: http://www.kraftraum-design.de/Server/Kraftraum_Artwork.htm Now with GI and better timing, interaction with text. Richard, thank you for your 2 cents (also in Euro they are cents:)). I thought about that, probably in a second film which shows the functions. By the way: the book light was made and built in Electric Image Modeler. Unfortunately I can't use it anymore, so I can't change the model. regards Frankg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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